In addition, within todays ILP lesson (monday 12th October) we presented our animatics to the class and got feedback. My feedback was as follows:
- Good use of non-diagetic sound.
- Needed to improve drawings- i did this by asking a friend to draw some of the stills for my animatic thus making it easier to understand and of better quality.
- Add some transitions/'camera angles' e.g. pans- i did this by working out how to add a couple of pans into my animatic and making it more realistic to my final piece.
- Add more characters near the end- i did this by add more characters into my animatic.
I can now compare my opening more readily to currently existing childrens TV drama's such as 'the demon headmaster' where all of the main characters are introduced within the opening therefore helping the viewer connect with them before the 'drama' begins.
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